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You say you love me.
What a joke.
You say you wold care if I died today.
Such a lie.

I'm already gone, but you haven't even noticed.
I'm dead.
A hollow corpse.

Most people say their parents are annoying.
But if something goes wrong, their parents are their salvation.
I used to think that too.
What I felt was but a hoax.

Saviors are angels, but my parents are no such thing.
My life is like a Cinderella story without the happy ending.
Everything I do turns to punishment.

I clean everyday, trying to please my parents, to no avail.
Yelling is their evil little torture.

My siblings are the evil ones.
But do they get what they deserve?
One could only dream of a miracle like that.

The older ones do nothing but play around town, while I am forced to do my "chores".
Once in a lifetime I am free from my prison cell, but almost all the days of happiness are dead.
I decay in front of your eyes, but you can't see.

My true salvation is of the arts.
The gentle, sweet, liquid sound that is My Chemical Romance.
The picturesque ways of stories and books.
The soft hum in the back of my mind when I finish the last detail of my feelings on canvas.
That is when I truly feel free.

But when you take part of that succulent salvation away from me, I am trapped.
During those times my friends comfort my pained chest.

I wish it could end.
To take it away would be a dream come true.
But dreams never come true.
Will you finally save me, or watch me burn to ashes?

Either way is better than this living Hell.
I wrote this after I was mad at my mom. These are my true feelings, and I hope you like!
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Unfuck-the-World Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Student Writer
This is deep. I can't say I relate with all of this, but I know people who feel that way. It will get better, that I know for sure. Thanks for sharing this amazing work :)
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kaymirtas Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are very welcome! I hope it does get better. If it doesn't, I'll be so screwed, because I want to go to this one concert, which would mean the world to me! If I don't go I might die. Hopefully my dad lets me go.
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MissFero Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I know where you're coming from, and it's so sad. :/
Very well written, though. I loved it. <3
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kaymirtas Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much. I'm glad you loved it! :tighthug:
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MissFero Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem. <3 ^_^
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ashtonlayne Featured By Owner May 7, 2011
Wow really strong. I love it xD
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kaymirtas Featured By Owner May 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! :iconhugplz: I love your icon!!!
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ashtonlayne Featured By Owner May 8, 2011
welcome :) lmao thanks!! xD
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kaymirtas Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Even Gerard's butt has sass! XD
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ashtonlayne Featured By Owner May 8, 2011
Very true!!! xD
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kaymirtas Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wish Frankie and Gee had gotten married. But then we wouldn't have Bandit, Cherry, or Lilly!
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ashtonlayne Featured By Owner May 8, 2011
hahaha ikr??? they're all so freaking adorable!
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kaymirtas Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know. They need to put up pictures of them on the MCR website.
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VinillaOctopus Featured By Owner May 7, 2011
I hope things get better for you <3
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kaymirtas Featured By Owner May 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't think it will. :iconsadplz: I got in trouble today for no reason.
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VinillaOctopus Featured By Owner May 8, 2011
:( We all go through that type of thing, you just need to get through it, and then hopefully, everything can get better :) it's like in that song 'sure you've hit the bottom, but remember that you're building from the ground up' :D
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kaymirtas Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You have made my day! :icondeathhugplz:
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VinillaOctopus Featured By Owner May 8, 2011
:D I'm glad!
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MichellyMe Featured By Owner May 7, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
beautifully written :')
i'v felt gone through exactly the same feelings
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kaymirtas Featured By Owner May 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! It sucks that they don't even care. They never listen to me either. :iconsqueezehugplz:
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MichellyMe Featured By Owner May 7, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
welcome :meow:
i know it really does :( and when they do listen, they don't ever understand :/
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kaymirtas Featured By Owner May 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, and if I get in a fight with one of my siblings (I have 6 but one doesn't live with us) my parents always take THEIR side!
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MichellyMe Featured By Owner May 7, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
:( i know, it just isn't fair...but anyhow, i think you managed to portray all those feelings really well here in your poem :heart:
btw, i LOVE your icon :')
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kaymirtas Featured By Owner May 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thnx! I love your icon too!
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MichellyMe Featured By Owner May 7, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
haha thanks :D
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